Jarod's Message
Searing sun bows heavilyto darkness,silentlydipping its fiery headbeneath horizon's edge.Fast treads shift noisilyas sandalshissover fleeting sands,aged without kindness.Stabbing pain sears...
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A bitter end indeed...an no-one will know the message he carried...lost in a moment of casual brutality...like so much in this world...powerful story...Every new beginning comes fromsome other...
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I enjoy writing about bitter irony. I've always seen irony as the bastard child of hope and despair. The poem depicts one man's struggle to save his people from annihilation, and through no fault of...
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ah, a painful piece sentimente...the imagery is so vivid and wrenching...if poetry is meant to evoke emotion, you have done your job! ~PA
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Thank you, PA. I'm heartened that you were able to feel what I tried to convey.-- Sentimente
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